Thursday, 17 January 2008

Sergi's for and against essay!

Should students be punished for not attending school?

I think that the students of ESO they must be punished if they do not to class, not in an extensive moderation, but if persistent. On the other hand i think that the nonobligatory study students they do not have to be punished because if they study it is because they want, and in the case of lack, they yet have a problem not the teachers or their family, in certain age, one is due to be a little mature, to know what they want in this life, and if it wants to study or to be awhile in classe warming up the chair.

In conclusion I think that is guessed the adwar to students with best marks, or do one accumulation of points with their assistance in class, and in the end they would change it for a prize, but not to discrimine the worse mark students to not to discouraged them.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I think that to be able to be a very good way of stimulating the students and I give you the whole reason. We meet on Monday
Look after yourself

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Anonymous said...

Sergi, I'm sure your composition would improve if you organised your information better... :-)
Please re-read it and be sure there are no words missing or extra words (eg. two subjects in the same sentence, lack of verb...) as in for example I think that the students of ESO they must be punished if they do not to class...
I'm not sure I understand your conclusion... (awarding students who attend classes wouldn't be a way of discriminating those who skip them?