Friday, 18 January 2008

Miriam's essay!

In all the institutes and colleges of the world examinations are done to see that the pupils know. Moreover For some it is something bad because they fail it them and makes to them it suspend the subject but for others this one well because it helps him to try they themselves and to see everything what they know and to demonstrate it intelligent that are.
I don’t like the examinations, I hate it because always I suspend or pass with low note after being the whole everything the study. However I think that this well that they do them because this way they force us to be able the things and in a future be able to do the things well in the profession to which we go away to dedicating.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi! miriam
I'm Berta, well I'm agree with you when you said that you don't like do the exams, but it's necessary.
finally, don't worry if you don't pass some exams, you are not the only, not now seriously do not worry because already you were approving them continue straining.
bye

Anonymous said...

The first sentence is a good way of introducing the topic. Cool! But it should be in a different paragraph, so that it is clear that it is the opening.
Moreover?? No need to use this connector here...
There's a better word for "suspend"...
Try organising your information in paragraphs and making short, easy and clear sentences. It will help the reader to understand the text!