Monday, 21 January 2008

Marta's text

Should academic competition be encouraged at school?

On the one hand it depends on the person and the personality of everyone. The
academic competitions could be result if everybody has an optimist insight of the
things and the teenagers generally hasn’t got a optimist insight. Also the academic competition depends of the attitude of the professor, if he helps you, you are more motivated to study and you try to improve on you marks. Also sometimes you find a bad professor. But it could be boring only thing on the marks, because you need other things.
On the other hand, the academic competitions learn you to improve your responsibility and prepare the students to the job world.
In my opinion, it result in a little number of persons, in addition if this persons are teenager or more young. I thinks that depends of the country, the personalities, and other things that affect the students. I really that this system doesn’t improve the education.
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Anonymous said...

Hi! Marta I'm berta alone well to say to you that I agree totally as for it of which the students we are not very optimistic, I at least it am not, also I agree in it's depend much of the teacher.
I certainly as for it of our system of education that change already! Because as your say not it improves the education

Saturday, January 26, 2008 11:11:00 pm
Anonymous said...

We'll, I hate exams or academic competition...I think that some things in school should change...

People with our ages can't be always in front of books, and computer and...what the hell, I can't pass all the afternoon doing that f*****g homework and studing!

I need to get out of the school...T__T OMG

Tuesday, February 05, 2008 11:58:00 pm
Anonymous said...

Marta, you are the only one that chose this topic! You are brave!
I'm sorry but I don't see which arguments are in favour and which are against! So maybe if you draw a mind map with two or three ideas for each paragraph it will help you organize your thoughts...
- Remember that the word "professor" is applied only to people who teach at university... Otherwise it's called "teacher".
- We studied verbs + prepositions... Come on, try it! Depend + _ _ I'm sure you can do it! [One clue: it's not OF]
- Can you have a look at your last sentence? I really that this system doesn’t improve the education. I really?? We need a verb there, don't we?
Please, pay attention to subject + verb agreement ("I thinks"?)...
Nice try.

Monday, February 25, 2008 8:21:00 pm

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