Thursday, 17 January 2008
Lorena's text!
I believe that if that it is correct that the teachers do examinations to the pupils, because if not, apart from with the homework and the behavior in class, didn’t know as evaluating them. On the other hand, I believe that they give them too much importance, and that probably there are people who strains very much in these subject and suspends the examination and hiseffort is valued little. To my it is not that I like to do examinations but I think that it is the method that has been in use the whole life and that must follow using, that if something is wanted one has to fight for it, because if there were no examinations the people abusing a and did can to do with the confidence of the teachers and that this it was his way of passing.
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Hey Lorena! I have seen some mistakes and now I will try to correct it =D
Well, I think that "because if not" it's wrong. I would put: because unless. And I've seen that you put unnecessary articles like on "examinations to THE pupils", this is my opinion maybe I'm wrong.
Related to the topic I agree with you.
Hello lorena am berta.
It seems to my me likely that agans examinations as you say your, in order that they should know since(as,like) the student goes.
And I have like very much when you have said that there are pupils who strain very much and the teachers do not value it because they don't pass the exam.
For the wrriting I think that when you said (to my it is no..) I doubt if it is correct.
As your collegues say, the first sentence is not correct... If is only a wrong translation of "sí"... If what you wanted to say was Creo que sí que es correcto que los profesores... you only need to say I believe that it is adequate that teachers... or you can reinforce is by using italics, for example.
Anyway, the best way to start the essay would be with an opening paragraph stating the topic of your composition! (a general sentence, so that the reader knows what you are going to talk about...)
Please, organise the information in 4 paragraphs!
Re-read and check your last sentence (it's extremely long and difficult to understand...)
To my it is not that I like to do examinations but I think that it is the method that has been in use the whole life and that must follow using, that if something is wanted one has to fight for it, because if there were no examinations the people abusing a and did can to do with the confidence of the teachers and that this it was his way of passing.
According to the topic... can you suggest other ways of evaluating students? This could support your opinion! :-)
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