Friday, 18 January 2008
Jonathan's text!
When the teacher says to you “Pay attention, lazy boy!”. You know you are paying attention, but on the flight of a fly. When your teacher looks to you throwing a piece of paper to one of your classroom mates, he punishes you. You tray to explain that you were experimenting the gravity law! When he knows that you are eating sweets and he wants make you do thirty four millions of redactions you tell her that you were giving proteins to your body… but this and the other situations the adults can’t understand… Adults can’t understand most of things, they only thing about money, numbers and work. For these reasons please, don’t ask me what I want to be when I became into an adult.
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11 comments:
a new topic here!!!! original, a surrealist critic essay, but you should broadcast it on a nonadults page.
I don't know if I can agree with you because your ideas about the text are so confusing, so I think this is the most original text in all the class.
okeyyyyyyyy so you should give us caramels¡¡¡
that one was Elisa
Jajajaj I like much the draft is very ... your xDD tape-worm that my fingerprint to say and to leave it here because I think that you have the whole reason of the world
i'm LORENAAA xDD
Yeahhh, so we talk! I totally agree with what you say.No understand anything, just worry about his life and work and do not understand that there are more things that benefit, so that we learn that we are young things our way and with a little fun .
I vote for eating candy!! YEAH!
I think that they are jealous of us, they can't stay sometimes or always (in some cases, Elisaaaaaaaa LOL) on the moon like us.
jonathan? what did you think? read the topics please xD is very original and humoristic text!
Wow!
I never imagined that for and against essays about school attendance could imply creating texts like that!
I especially like the part where you say "Adults can’t understand most of things, they only thing about money, numbers and work."
It reminds me of a fragment of the Little Prince, by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry (Have you ever read it?)
It says...
[...] If I have told you these details about Asteroid B-612 and revealed its number to you, it is on account of grown-ups. Grown-ups love figures. When you talk about a new friend, they never ask questions about essential matters. They never say to you: 'What does his voice sound like? What games does he prefer? Does he collect butterflies?' They ask you: 'How old is he? How many brothers does he have? How much does he weigh? How much money does his father earn?' It is only then that they feel they know him. If you were to mention to grown-ups: 'I've seen a beatiful house built with pink bricks and [...] doves on the roof...' they would not be able to imagine such a house. You would have to say to them: 'I saw a house worth a hundred thousand pounds'. Then they would exclaim: 'Oh! How lovely.'
(From Chapter 4)
It's a pity that your text had nothing to do with the assignment given! And please, remind me NOT to ask you what you want to be when you are an adult! (Just in case!)
You're a original boy!!I agree whit you!!
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