In my school assistance is a subject really controlled, they watch over strictly students assistance.
In my opinion Gabriel Ferrater’s rules are severe enough.
On one hand I believe that controlling pupils it’s quite important because some students are a little bit irresponsible and they would never go to classes, especially the ones that do not want to follow studying.
But on the other hand I don’t think that the way of punishment they use is the best one. I think it’s tough enough. I don’t agree with their way of penalize students. If you have six faults you get a “conducta” and if you have three “conductes” you get turned out, furthermore you don’t get allowed to go outing. That’s what I don’t like of their method.
Personally I think that punishment it’s sometimes important, but it would be good to find another way of checking assistance.
Friday, 18 January 2008
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2 comments:
helllloooo iris¡¡¡ yes I think that the way that G.F school controles not gaing to school is to radical, because imagene that you arrive one day late...maybe is for personal things like you sleep or another thing.And also is unfear because parents stop letting us going out¡¡¡ THATS not SO FEAR¡¡¡.
well Iris ;) bye bye
im Elisa
Nice text, Iris!
But the word assistance... you know how to improve it, don't you?
It's rather strange... some of your sentences have two subjects!! I know that recommendation 2 is to include a subject, but no need of having more than one! :-)
Be careful with the conecctor: it's "on the one hand", you need the article!
Remember a golden rule: PREPOSITION + ING FORM! Can you find the mistake?
Go outing??
Good distribution of paragraphs, although do you think that "In my opinion GF's rules are..." should be included in the second paragraph? It seems a conclusion, doesn't it?
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