Monday, 21 January 2008
Elisah's compostion!
I doný think that exams have to be used just for testing a classmade knoeledge, I think is unfear because you also can learn from others things and not only what books of "x" year says. Imagene that you do a Maths exam, obiously if you fail it doesnt mean that you are a potatoe in that subject, yust that you need more practice and that you have to work harder. Also I think that exams are not that wortenougt beacuse if you are a nervous person, sometimes nervs can play to you a bad one¡¡¡How many times we havent hear a clasmade say - oh my gosh¡¡¡ how could it be that i havent seen this one¡¡¡ or -Ididnt understan it¡¡¡, yes mens stress isnt good for exams I think is good making exams because you can see where your errors or good points are but not for mesuring youre intelligence or knowlede. Because for examle, as i was saying at the beginning, if you are a grate gardener or farmer you know a lot about that and in school you will not have an exam about hens or roosters nair flowers...Its okey that exams test youre knowledge academy but not youre global knowledge.
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I think your text is the most difficult to understand, more than jonathan's essay.
I agree with you in that the exams are not so usefull, but if you didn't study for an exam, you will never study, it's like a prove that your are so good to continue there.
Your text is really difficult to understand, check it ;)
Elisa I think you should divide your composition in more than a paragraph, because it's a little bit complicated to read. It would be better if there were white spaces,as Salmeron says!!!
Elisa, I think that before writing a text your you have to arrange your thoughts, and you have to do a sketch to your you before starting writing the text.
In this text there are words that do not exist!
Elisa, I think that before writing a text your you have to arrange your thoughts, and you have to do a sketch to your you before starting writing the text.
In this text there are words that do not exist!
Elisa, I think that before writing a text your you have to arrange your thoughts, and you have to do a sketch to your you before starting writing the text.
In this text there are words that do not exist!
Wow! Sergi, I think that she already understood =P
Your test is difficult to understand because there are mistakes in some words, though it is possible to deduce what you want to put, you would have to revise the things before giving them finished. "It is better and well, that much and bad!"
Mr's phrase Martin ;) jejj
I'm agree with you, because much happens to me, it is something that cannot be controlled, it is necessary to prepare better and to overcome the nerves.
you should check spelling, and put more paragraph. Your composition is too... too... complicated!
Hey Elisa!! I love like your composition!! I think that you have been written expressly badly because then, we can correct and criticize it ( to get out of our history exam memory TToTT )
WIthout love, it's wrong +_+
Well...I didn't read the text...I'm sure you'll understand it xD
WoW!
I'm impressed! I had never seen so many spelling mistakes together! :-)
Apart from this little problem... You should organise your ideas in paragraphs, as your classmates say, because you give some arguments against exams, and other are in favour, but you finish reading the text without knowing which they are! (They seem to be camouflaged)
So... this is my piece of advice for you: calm down, don't write everything it comes to your head and... every now and then... use a dictionary to check spelling!
This text reminds me of that type of writing that is called stream of consciousness: the author writes as if s/he was thinking... Well, you know how famous Virginia Woolf became... Who knows? Maybe you are the next! But meanwhile... please organise your text! :-)
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