I chose the second answe, if should students be punished for not attending school.
Well, I think that they shouldn't be punished but other mesures should be taken. However, these measures would depend on the age of the studens because it is absurd punishing them dependingon the student, because they woulddo whatever their like.
On the one Hand, I think that ESO students should be taken into acount more than BAT students and if somebody doesn't go to class he/she shouldn't be punished but if a sanction. A lot of school the sanction is a "conducta" and when the students have a lot of "conductes" tell her parents, about then and try to solution.
On the other hand I think that students of Batxillerat shouldn't be punished for not attending school because they go to school because they want. Nevertheless, students shouldn't miss their classes because studyingis good and important for their lives.
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Hello Berta!
well, first I said that I'm agree with you when you said that it depends of the age but there are persons who need anybody to control them, also students of BAT; for example, there are students who go at the school because their parents want that make it their sons and daughters.
We need a revolution :)
Berta, thank you for your composition.
Be careful because a for and against essay uses quite formal language, so you would not normally start with "well, I think..."
The first paragraph (opening) should be a short introduction to the topic...
Good use of the passives!
Re-read the sentence lot of school the sanction is a "conducta" and when the students have a lot of "conductes" tell her parents, about then and try to solution. and see if you can improve it...
Good attempt!
Roser
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